The story was quite interesting, and the drawings were nice. You had an interesting concept for telling the story that's worth more experimentation. However, it might be worth adding some sound effects (silence isn't exactly appealing). Also, I felt bored at times waiting for the next scene. You could shorten the time between each scene, and make some of the animations faster.
Good work on your first try!
Thanks I plan to edit it soon, I'm glad there are SOME supportive people on newgrounds.
I quite liked it, except for the fact that it didn't have much of a plot (probably intended), but it still made me LOL!
A good movie
The plot was simple, yet elegant. Kind of brings a warm fuzzy feeling.
I liked the fighting scenes. The grey squirrel holding the stick looked like he was trying to swordfight.
I liked how you put seemingly random events together under a common theme. And the hilarity that follows. Good job :D
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