00:00
00:00
View Profile Xyander

1 Movie Reviews w/ Response

All 4 Reviews

Goodjob!

The story was quite interesting, and the drawings were nice. You had an interesting concept for telling the story that's worth more experimentation. However, it might be worth adding some sound effects (silence isn't exactly appealing). Also, I felt bored at times waiting for the next scene. You could shorten the time between each scene, and make some of the animations faster.
Good work on your first try!

InternetMonkey responds:

Thanks I plan to edit it soon, I'm glad there are SOME supportive people on newgrounds.

Age 27, Female

Student.

Somewhere.

Joined on 11/29/09

Level:
6
Exp Points:
360 / 400
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.74 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
0
Saves:
6
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
413